Post Write- Anmol Sethi

Post Write 1

1) My essay was about the influence of zombies on modern day culture. I discussed the positive implications of having a zombie platform overflowing onto society issues as well as the negative consequences. The primary question explored in my essay was where one draws the line between too much influence from the zombie platform which causes misconceptions, and when the platform is effective.

2) I think the part of the analysis that was difficult was how to explain certain quotes I used effectively. I think I could explain them in a way that made sense to me but I had trouble communicating my thoughts to the reader.

3) It is important to summarize an article as it helps us find the main points of an article. By finding the main points in a concise manor, one can analyze the work much easier. In the future, we will read a lot of articles and having the skill to be able to easily summarize will help us complete assignments faster and will help our essays be more thorough. 

4) I knew how to write this essay after the first rhetorical analysis lecture. Although my first draft lacked a few items, I knew what was expected.

5) I think the best feedback I got was to include my conclusion and a paragraph designated to explain the purpose, audience and genre. I had forgotten to include those in my first draft so it was a nice reminder. Without that feedback I may have completely forgotten about it.

6) I think one strength in my paper is my summary. I think it was balanced and concise and included all of the main points of the essay.

7) I think I could have improved my analysis portion. I feel as though I have all of the necessary parts for my analysis but I think I could have explained some things better. I should have explained the quotes a little better in the logos section.

8) I am not as satisfied as I could be with the logos analysis section. I think parts of it are solid but I had trouble explaining the quotes enough. It makes sense to me in my head but I have trouble communicating what my thoughts are with the reader maybe.