Unit 1 Post Write

My essay was about how the zombies have impacted our culture. Throughout the essay, I spoke about the positive impact zombie have had and the negative ones as well. The primary question I would say would be "how zombies could have such a large impact on society." The most difficult part for me during the analysis was when I had to describe the audience, purpose, and etc. I found this difficult because I felt the article was written for general public but it was published in John Hopkins University Press. It is important to know how to analyze future papers because you will want to know the most important points. I knew how to write a rhetorical analysis when you gave us examples during class. It helped me go step by step and know how to split my paragraphs. The best constructive feedback was comparing my paper to the example given during class. The strength in my paper would be the quotes used in the body paragraphs. It makes the paper very creditable to the audience and it well supported. The area of my paper could use some improvement would be the conclusion and the explanation of the audience, purpose and etc. Well, you can help me out by leaving responses where my paper lacked support, grammar, and etc.